Banshee Crow

At first I thought it was the gales
That howled into the night,
But then the banshee's keening wails
Broke all the glass in sight

I hopped from bed up to the sill
To see what I could see
I saw a crow upon the hill
A dark monstrosity

My throat closed up; I couldn't breathe
I thought that I would die
But it flew out towards the sea -
Across the moonlit sky

But then the worry came again
Which nobel love would die?
Me, M’Lady,M’Lord, and when?
Which one did Death espy?

I bit my nails; I cracked my wrists
The fear was like a wrench
It smashed into my heart like fists,
And kept me in suspense

It was three days of agony
Till I found out M’Lord had died -
My sailor son in Tripoli,
Was killed in cannon fight

I guess I don't get WHY the crow
Gave his warning to me
Why screech of death at my window,
Instead of Tripoli?
Instead of Tripoli?


(Besides being a woman, the banshee can take the form of animals, such as the crow)

Received 1st place in "Creepy Irish Creatures" contest
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February 7, 2013 at 10:36 AM
yup just like them...PD
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October 29, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful poem. Tony
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October 27, 2011 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
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October 27, 2011 at 10:17 AM
Congrats Susan on a big first place win luv...
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October 27, 2011 at 9:39 AM
Susan, congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses
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October 27, 2011 at 8:26 AM
I love this original take on the contest, Susan - I find all the different legends fascinating and didn't know that about the banshee. Great stuff!
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October 27, 2011 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Creepy Irish Creatures" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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October 26, 2011 at 9:39 PM
Great rhythm throughout this tale of warning. I love the suspense . Well done Susan... cheers Margaret
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October 26, 2011 at 5:25 PM
Sue worked very hard at this fine write..she's a real CHAMP ..big congrad's Light & Love
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October 26, 2011 at 3:34 PM
I love all the physical symptoms of fear...that's great writing. Congrats on this difficult contest win! Awesome. You are still the couplet queen to me! ha . Gwendolen
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October 26, 2011 at 2:02 PM
WAY TO GO!!!!! Just peeking in, can't stay long at all! Congrats. I am proud of you!
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October 21, 2011 at 10:56 AM
wow, I don't know how i missed this one before, Susan. you did a really good job with it. I sure hope it ranks!! How are you today? I am enjoying my time here at Soup while hubbie is out job hunting. maybe my last chance for the day! Hope to see you posting your new poems soon. Luv, Andrea
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