Bankers' Ball 2008

A potato layer bake and sausage stretcher Evaporated milk with left-over pudding Sugar sandwiches- A bitter Squeeze !

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Christopher Higgins

Date: 11/3/2008 7:11:00 AM

Wonderful write Brian. I learn so much from reading your poems.

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/3/2008 6:43:00 AM

Another great epulaeryu! You are the master! And..all I need for my laugh of the day, is to read the comments!! Both of you are fun to read!!~:) Carrie

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/3/2008 5:21:00 AM

Oh that Sean is a riot!!! As for your poem, yes, stretching it out indeed! This is surely different and clever with title. Love, Shar

Sean Kelly

Date: 11/3/2008 1:19:00 AM

XXXXXcellent Sir Brian and most fitting ... You DO know the difference between a pigeon and a banker ??? :: - A pigeon can still put a deposit on a BMW ....