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Bank Robbery

( BANK ROBBERY ) Theres going to be a robbery, where theres lots of cash at hand. Its going to take the 4 of us, and we all got to understand. There cant be any mess ups, we got to plan this robbery out. Case the joint and watch everyone, know what each one is about. Do it in the morning when most people are at work. Scare the bank teller, make them think there going buserk. Take 2 guns and a taser, and give the man a note. Demand all the money in our bags, then later we can gloat. Make sure the get a way car runs, make sure its full of gas. We got a time limit, and each detail has got to be real fast. Wear ski masks on our face, so no-one knows its us. Look very scary, jump in circles and always try to cuss. We are in the car on the way to bank, our blood is really cooking. Got Mel in the drivers seat, and Jason is the lookout cause he is better looking. We are really getting close, only a block and each one posed. We pull up to the bank, and the damn sign says its closed.

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Date: 11/7/2014 10:05:00 PM
LOL This is great, loved it. Love a good story!
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:34:00 PM
I like the lookout being better looking, I found this clever and funny!
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/7/2014 3:10:00 AM
Thanks Dan. always enjoy your kind words. Have a great day
Date: 11/6/2014 5:49:00 AM
Love the twist Jasmine...almost the perfect plan...hugs Tim
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/6/2014 6:38:00 AM
thanks Tim lol. It got floiled again :)
Date: 11/6/2014 5:33:00 AM
LOL I wondered where this was going - the ending was a great twist:-) hugs jan xx
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Jasmine Cruz
Date: 11/6/2014 5:39:00 AM
I did it again well my husband did. He didnt sign out and I responded under his name. sorry about that. we need another computer. and this Friday we will get another one. Greg is getting me an early Christmas present :) Im so happy

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