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Bank Heist

Clyde Shanks Robs banks With gal Named Sal For tasks Wear masks Take loot And scoot Foot race Cops chase Both caught All naught Both ruffed And cuffed To jail No bail Court date Learned fate Judge tough No guff To pen For ten

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/31/2020 7:56:00 PM

Hi Robert, I like the “ footle” form. You did good with the form. Nice flow and rhymes from to start to finish. Well done:-) Alexis

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 8/1/2020 11:22:00 AM

Thanks Alexis. Had fun pulling this one together. Best to you and stay safe - Bob

Michael Tor

Date: 7/9/2020 10:38:00 PM

Love this write Bob.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 7/7/2020 11:08:00 AM

A clever footle -- like it very much - very well penned my friend. Think I'll give it a go. Blessings, Jennifer.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/7/2020 11:13:00 AM

Thank you, Jenn. They are fun to concoct but very challenging. Bob

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/4/2020 3:04:00 PM

Well done footle!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 7/2/2020 9:22:00 PM

Hah! Awesome feat of Footle. Enjoyed! xomo

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/4/2020 3:53:00 PM

Thank you, P.T. - glad you enjoyed. Hope your 4th of July is going well - Bob H

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/2/2020 7:13:00 PM

Well done...I enjoyed...no time to waste

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/2/2020 6:52:00 PM

Gosh, what a tough judge! I'd hate to have to write for 10 years, esp. with a pen! … lol. Thanks, Bob!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/2/2020 5:15:00 PM

Loved them Bob, I put one on today, first attempt. Tom

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/2/2020 6:06:00 PM

I read it Tom and you did a great job! They are a challenge to concoct but fun to write. Keep 'em coming! Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2020 4:40:00 PM

Really fun and great done, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/2/2020 4:53:00 PM

Thank you, Anne Lise. Great to hear from you. Stay safe. Bob

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/2/2020 4:36:00 PM

OMG, Bob. Terrific Footie. I never tried this form Amazing! You told an entire plot with a minimum of words. Truly awesome. Congratulations. Sincerely, Pangie xx

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 7/2/2020 4:54:00 PM

Thank you, Pangie: They are a challenge to write but challenges keep me writing. Best on you - Bob