Banished

Broken bleeding heart
Tattered torn soul
Mind in shreds blowing in the wind
Like so many scraps of muddied linen
Blank eyes hiding an eternity of sorrow
Clenched fists with bitten nails
Restraining a life-long anguish
Milky flesh bearing the scars of self disgust
As if scratched by the venomous nails of Decrepitude
But really just the victim of a desperate mind
A defensive defenseless creature all in all
Sitting hunched in a blackened room
An opaque wall of shattered confidence
Fences her off from life and love
How she would love to tear down that wall
With her crumpled talons
To shake off her shroud of self hatred
To pretend to beauty and confidence
But there is no point in defying or denying
She can never be part of the world
For the world wants no part of her
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 13, 2009 at 12:11 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poetry being featured this week. GB Tyesha
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March 11, 2009 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Amy. Love, Carol
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March 11, 2009 at 1:51 PM
Congrats Amy on "Banished" being featured. Vince
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March 10, 2009 at 3:11 PM
Congrats on this deeply written poem being featured this week...simply lovely
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March 10, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Miss Bree is a featured poet!! How about that?!! Congrats darlin', well deserved!! Love, Me
Mason Avatar
March 9, 2009 at 5:24 PM
Thought-provoking write here Amy and an excellent choice to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations!
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March 9, 2009 at 12:09 PM
Amy - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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March 9, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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March 9, 2009 at 3:46 AM
wow thank you so much guys it means so much to me to be featured and have your kind comments -- i really appreciate it :D
Jordan Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 5:53 PM
Amy this well written piece is full of sad emotions - Life is often very hard and cruel - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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March 8, 2009 at 5:32 PM
The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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