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Banished

Broken bleeding heart Tattered torn soul Mind in shreds blowing in the wind Like so many scraps of muddied linen Blank eyes hiding an eternity of sorrow Clenched fists with bitten nails Restraining a life-long anguish Milky flesh bearing the scars of self disgust As if scratched by the venomous nails of Decrepitude But really just the victim of a desperate mind A defensive defenseless creature all in all Sitting hunched in a blackened room An opaque wall of shattered confidence Fences her off from life and love How she would love to tear down that wall With her crumpled talons To shake off her shroud of self hatred To pretend to beauty and confidence But there is no point in defying or denying She can never be part of the world For the world wants no part of her

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/13/2009 12:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your fantastic poetry being featured this week. GB Tyesha
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Date: 3/11/2009 3:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2009 1:51:00 PM
Congrats Amy on "Banished" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/10/2009 3:11:00 PM
Congrats on this deeply written poem being featured this week...simply lovely
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Date: 3/10/2009 10:47:00 AM
Miss Bree is a featured poet!! How about that?!! Congrats darlin', well deserved!! Love, Me
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Date: 3/9/2009 5:24:00 PM
Thought-provoking write here Amy and an excellent choice to be a feature here at the Soup this week. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2009 12:09:00 PM
Amy - Congratulations on your poem being featured this week! Very well deserved. Peace always, John
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Date: 3/9/2009 6:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/9/2009 3:46:00 AM
wow thank you so much guys it means so much to me to be featured and have your kind comments -- i really appreciate it :D
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Date: 3/8/2009 5:53:00 PM
Amy this well written piece is full of sad emotions - Life is often very hard and cruel - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/8/2009 5:32:00 PM
The vivid imagery carries your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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