Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Bandits Fishy Tale

What were you thinking of mother
When you gave me that extra sardine
You know they are my favourites
Now…I am not feeling too fine

Why you looking like that mother
What you fancying to do
Please don’t pick me up
Or for sure will do a p@<>@....  Whewww

Penned 26 October 2017
Contest: write me something funny

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Gregory Richard Barden November 9, 2017 at 11:40 PM LOL - I laughed out loud, Seren, thank you - so funny and whimsical - congrats on your win! :-) Seren Roberts November 10, 2017 at 2:00 AM Lol thx Gregory....I laughed writing it.....Seren

Sara Kendrick November 8, 2017 at 2:37 PM Cat's meow!! Congrats!! Sara Seren Roberts November 10, 2017 at 2:00 AM Hi Sara. Thank you.....Seren

Tim Smith October 29, 2017 at 5:43 PM Lol...I think she smells a bit fishy as well

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 27, 2017 at 9:51 PM Lol! Nooo don't pick up the cat! Awesome:) my best to you for the contest! xomo Seren Roberts October 28, 2017 at 8:34 PM thank you Maureen....Seren

Russell Sivey October 27, 2017 at 8:40 PM This is a grandiose and funny write my friend! You have delighted me by your incredible comical poem here Seren! I really enjoyed reading your amazing piece this evening! I wouldn't want to smell what that puke or poop would smell like! I'm sure it's a wonderful thing to see, leftover sardine, yuck! What a lovely piece, Great Work!! Seren Roberts October 28, 2017 at 8:35 PM LOL Russell I would rather not smell either as well....Seren

Jan Allison October 27, 2017 at 7:27 PM ha ha ha and for once its not ME writing poop poetry Seren! :-) hugs jan xx Seren Roberts October 27, 2017 at 7:29 PM lol was going to say puke