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the shishi-odoshi, literally means "dear (or boar) scarer".


 

bamboo pipes heaving raindrops breaking silence against stone deer runs off

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Date: 5/30/2025 4:33:00 PM
Hello Vanya Evaangeline, yes aq deer would run pff when hearing a loud noise. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2025 8:33:00 AM
Hello Vanya, It is used for driving away pest! i learned something today. it5 is used for calming meditation. Now that is interesting. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 5/30/2025 11:39:00 PM
Thanks Darlene. I thought it was interesting that bamboo implements tend to be associated with calming meditation, even though it used to be for driving away pests.
Date: 5/26/2025 8:57:00 PM
Here I am again. I had been commenting to this one not even realizing it was in my contest. Congrats for your win
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 5/27/2025 1:58:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea! It was a fun contest (I just realized I haven't wrote a haiku prior to that)
Date: 5/26/2025 12:21:00 PM
Interesting about literal meaning if the process with bamboo!
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Date: 5/17/2025 10:11:00 AM
Gorgeous haiku my dear poet friend Vanya. I love it and so enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude for mmy win in your contest and reading one of my poems. God bless you always and your poetic talent. Hugs
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 5/26/2025 5:47:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Len!
Date: 5/13/2025 3:42:00 PM
Nice one!
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 5/16/2025 3:55:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Date: 5/10/2025 11:57:00 PM
Beautiful!
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Vanya Evangeline
Date: 5/16/2025 3:55:00 AM
Thank you!

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