Ballroom Delights

With an earnest smile he asks me to dance
He is as nervous as I, I can judge by his stance
He glides me the floor and we began to prance
His distinctive manly smell puts me into a trance

His hand encircles my waist as our feet take flight
My breath sharply quickens, is my corset tied to tight
I fit perfectly his arms despite differences in height
I know my life will be forever changed this very night

Our hands clasped together, his eyes locked with mine
Electric shocks felt everywhere, definitely a tell-tale sign
"I love your teal blue dress", he says, "you look divine"
"And your lips fascinate me they are the color of wine"

"Thank you kind sir", a sudden blush reddens  my face
With a grin he twirls and dips me with amazing grace
He reaches for my hair tie and releases it from the lace
"Your undeniably beauty madam truly lights up this place"

I smile for I know that he is equally smitten and sincere
We dance through the night, just wanting to stay near
He whispers, "I want to dance with you forever my dear"
Undoubtedly I know we'll be dancing like this year after year

01/05/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/13/2015 9:36:00 AM
A Cinderella story if I've ever heard one. :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/14/2015 11:52:00 AM
We all hope for one :)
Date: 2/3/2015 6:33:00 PM
this is so sweet. And I see from the congrats here that you were on the winners' list.BIG congrats. You deserved it.
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/14/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 12/26/2014 9:36:00 PM
CECILIA, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 3/14/2015 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 12/24/2014 9:58:00 PM
Now I sure hope this is a true story! I loved it!
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/25/2014 8:09:00 PM
Thank you Arthur
Date: 12/18/2014 8:20:00 PM
So nice written, Cecilia! That Monorhyme is not an easy one to do! Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/25/2014 8:08:00 PM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 12/16/2014 4:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Cecilia, beautiful poem. Bless you
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/17/2014 10:27:00 AM
Thank you Eve
Date: 12/16/2014 2:52:00 PM
Wonderfully written Cecilia. Congratulations on your win
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/17/2014 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Brenda
Date: 12/16/2014 12:03:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Cecilia:-) hugs Jan xx
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/17/2014 10:28:00 AM
Thank you Jan
Date: 12/5/2014 8:00:00 AM
This was a wonderful dance :)
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/17/2014 10:29:00 AM
Thank you Casarah
Date: 12/5/2014 7:15:00 AM
so beautifully descriptive Cecilia - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 12/17/2014 10:29:00 AM
Your luck helped, thanks again, hugs
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