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I rather like ballroom dancing, though am not graceful enough for the fast Viennese waltzes.  My speed is more foxtrots, American waltz, swing, and American tango.

The orchestra was loud when I walked in, Performing a whimsical waltz by Strauss. I picked a group of friends and settled-in, And perused the fineries of the house. The chandeliers were unevenly spaced, Creating random spaces of shadows Where intimate strangers chastely embraced, And not-so-innocent virgins caroused. A friendly acquaintance introduced me To his available little sister. Turned out she was charming and quite lovely, So I gave up trying to resist her. “I would be most honored, beyond measure; If you’d care to dance, it’d be my pleasure.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/26/2014 9:37:00 PM
MARK, A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:00:00 PM
Delighted to see you work on the winners list..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 12/16/2014 12:13:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/4/2014 6:56:00 AM
- Lovely poem, Mark - Luck in contest! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/11/2014 9:39:00 AM
Thanks. Always liked ballroom myself.
Date: 12/2/2014 10:24:00 PM
Nice Sonnet Mark. Good luck in the contest.
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/3/2014 5:43:00 PM
Thanks. Enjoyed doing that one.
Date: 12/2/2014 6:38:00 PM
what a charming write mark:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Mark J. Halliday
Date: 12/2/2014 10:19:00 PM
Glad you liked it. You're always good for supportive comments.

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