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I douse myself by melodious waves of music As he maneuvers me into his gracefulness Clasps of our hands draw my ebullience like magic In ecstasy, feet slide to and fro to express The pleasure at ritzy hall in ballroom delight Huge array of lights shimmers on our gala dress Oh, I am sheer brought to the crest of his limelight! He sways me and turns, our balancing pays the price Wearing my confidence in the spectator’s sight I can feel every beat with his most sumptuous spice His perfume wafting on air, I’m more than alive Clutching back our body close, great passions arise All in delighted spirit, convivial grace thrives Ballroom dancing paints the beauty where love survives Nov. 30, 2014 10.55 a.m - In honor of Victor Gabriel Gilbert, a great painter and artist. I like him so much and his masterpiece. Imagining to dance with him in consummate ease:) Seventh Place Contest: Ballroom Delights Judged: 12/16/2014 Sponsor: Poet Isiah Zerbst

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 9:38:00 PM

HELLO LEO... A beautiful and wonderful Ballroom Delight. Congrats on your win :) Always & Forever YOUR bff, AND FAV POET SIS...~LINDA~

Len Gasun
Date: 12/29/2014 1:46:00 AM

Thank you so much my dearest sis, lovely BFF and FAV POET of mine! Hugs, hugs, hugs! God bless you and your loved ones/ family always!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/17/2014 2:57:00 PM

Delighted to see you work on the winners list..Way to go..Sara

Len Gasun
Date: 12/25/2014 6:11:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend Sara. Merry Christmas! Hugs!

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/16/2014 1:18:00 PM

Congrats on your great win Leonora,yours is the champion...huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 12/17/2014 8:37:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Kayod. Warm congrats on your wins as well! Big hugs!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/7/2014 6:32:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely atmosphere too. Enjoyed. Tfs

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:23:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Ravi for sharing your precious time reading my poem and the very encouraging comment. Big hugs!

Nathan D.

Date: 12/5/2014 7:03:00 AM

a excellent tribute to an obviously gifted painter. hope all is well with you glad to be reading your stuff again

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:42:00 AM

Again, thank you so much for your lovely visit my very dear friend Nathan. Advance Merry Christmas to you and your family/loved ones. God bless and more blessings!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 10:21:00 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Nathan for sharing your precious time to read my humble poem and your very encouraging comment. Sorry for coming late 'cuz super busy at school this wk and also got big problem with internet. I'm still fixing it but tom. is non-workin holiday here. BTW pls, pls. give my warm regards to my dearest poet sis and friend Linda. Hope she'll be back soon. She's terribly missed by everybody. Thank u sm again. Big hugs!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/5/2014 12:49:00 AM

A beautifully written tribute.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/9/2014 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend M. L. Big hug!

Betty Bateson

Date: 12/2/2014 6:38:00 AM

The joy of dancing. I can feel it...

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:46:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Betty. Big hug!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/1/2014 12:22:00 AM

Excellent. Nicely done. Enjoyed reading it.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:45:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Ravi. Big hug!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/30/2014 8:39:00 AM

Beautifully portrayed Leonora - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:44:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Jan. Big hug!

Tim Smith

Date: 11/30/2014 7:56:00 AM

Simply magnificent dance....hugs Tim

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:44:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Tim. Big hug!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2014 12:12:00 AM

wow leo, i am fascinating by the whole mood and image of this scene.. you simply delight!.. dance on!.. will you this season.. huggs

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:43:00 PM

:))Thank you so much my dear friend Nette. Yeah I will, my dear friend. A lot of special dance numbers again are asked for us at school this season. But mostly are modern and folk dances, lol. Tytysm again. Big hug. I'll visit you and the others soon.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/29/2014 11:03:00 PM

Very nicely done Leonora. A beautiful atmosphere. Good luck in the contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:39:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Brenda. Big hug! I'll visit you and the rests here soon. I'm just dropping by for a while.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 11/29/2014 10:02:00 PM

graceful in every line Leonora.. :)! woowowow! thanks much friend for the comments.. :)!

Len Gasun
Date: 12/4/2014 11:37:00 PM

Thank you so much as well my dear friend Olive for you time and nice comment. Big hug!