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The amber sunshine huddles beneath billowing clouds to meet the graying green weave of the horizon, and countryside of enliven crowds of red poppies. A little girl in her pink dress, trimmed in white lace, runs, as her dark auburn hair dance free with the breeze; in a place full of grace and peace. Her red balloons escape from her hold. They roll and soar towards the golden heavens, swallowed up by the clouds, as she follows. 2/10/2023

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Date: 3/3/2023 7:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I love your lovely write/picture. Have a blessed day......................
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Date: 2/10/2023 5:35:00 AM
Eve, this is a great poem you've written for the balloon contest. This poem is made much more beautiful by your wonderful images. I hope you do well in the contest.
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Date: 2/10/2023 1:49:00 AM
Great imagery Eve. Pity you lost the balloons. Best for a win. Hugs. Hope you're better.
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Date: 2/10/2023 1:42:00 AM
- A lovely poem for the balloon contest, Eve - She must have been sad when she lost them - My balloon proposal .... think many people don't dare to write a comment ... it is "special" and for some "a taboo" .... but still true - Best wishes to you in the contest :) - hugs
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