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Ballin'

My favorite time of the day is when I'm ballin' I am the best and nobody can stop me When i cross; the defenders are fallin' Everyone who watches gets to see And hear the sound of the swish The spectators start to go crazy I get them more hyped when I go under my leg for the dish The crowd goes wild when I pull up for THREEEEEEE I am compared to Larry Bird In my opinion I am even better Whenever I drive the defenders grab my shirt It's time to deliver this letter Like the mailman Karl Malone I've also go great stamina There is ice stuck in my bones I can rebound like Ralph Sampson In conclusion, I am the best I know how to ground and pound To all of the rest: I always put it down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/21/2016 1:15:00 AM
Joshua Cox, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you for the encouragement! :D
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Date: 5/18/2016 3:35:00 AM
Joshua, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/18/2016 12:13:00 AM
Joshua, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
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