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Ballet and Beef

Frustrating being a poet. If I am to write for you I do have to read your mind. So what are the words that arouse your passion? And why do you love that stew pot while you possess ballet that is danced to beautiful music tripped, as they say, to that light fantastic? A meaty dish with vegetables: carrots, potatoes, onions, leeks. Ballet, on tiny tippytoes, decorous, comely ankles and winged feet. Oh, feet that fly to the level of your beautiful eye while your spry toe-tips and heels are but a foot apart. Would you be telling me far too much, by letting me read that look in your eye, as I guess that mélange of thoughts of beautiful ballet and succulent stew? (16 Mar 2024)

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Date: 3/23/2024 10:15:00 AM
So interesting the contrast of these two very different things. Yet we all have very different things we enjoy. Nice work
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Date: 3/16/2024 5:25:00 PM
Hello Andrew, Your words cleverly intertwines the contrasting worlds of poetry and culinary delights. The juxtaposition of ballet’s elegance with the hearty simplicity of stew sparks intrigue. Your words delve into the mysteries of human desires and passions, inviting reflection on the interplay between the refined and the rustic. I loved your poetic inquiry into the complexities of the human experience is both thought-provoking and delightful. - Blessings, Daniel
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Andrew John
Date: 3/21/2024 6:06:00 AM
Thanks so much, Daniel.
Date: 3/16/2024 5:20:00 PM
a unique but captivating poem, Andrew. Ballet & beef...two contrasts intertwined perfectly in your poem. The last two lines grabbed me :-) have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 3/21/2024 6:06:00 AM
Thanks very much, Sara.

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