Ballerina

Liquid dress clinging and folding
A cake decoration within the frosting
And the glaze of marzipan, the tip toeing
Arc of pixie feet in the snow
Icing of the glade catching beneath her

The music box played rapture in hearty volumes
Restraining an elfin queen beneath the fingers
A grasp upon the neck as it meets the armour
Of your delicate bones faintly wrapped in silk
Or leather, a white coated skeletal waltz

Swaying in the effervescence of a dying swan
Ankle arched heavenward with a fistful of scarlet
Reaching to envelop in fingers and hungry palms
The throbbing heart pulsating in those gloves
Bursting out a rainbow of red confection

Sugar coated, the food colouring sinks in, deep like a flood
For what is cochineal if not the blood of an armoured
Creature scurrying over each other and corpses, en pointé
Surging closer to the edge of perfection, she
Arches her back like a cat and earthbound, a faceful of dirt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 4:51 PM
Great potential! There are a number of places where "a" would be clearer than "the". Alliteration is a powerful tool yet the imagery still must make sense, like wise the personification must make sense. Keep writing! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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January 21, 2009 at 12:08 PM
At 18 you are remarkably well read... tell me, where were you educated? Your vocabulary is already prodigious. This is a finely crafted piece, full of exquisite imagery and phrasing. Well done my friend! (PS please look at 'The Morning Speaks...' a tribute to Dylan Thomas.) Thanks!! (PPS I am 60, and still consider myself a 'neophyte...)
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January 19, 2009 at 8:57 PM
Oh Nathaniel really nice to read this one. Great job. Laurie
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