Iolanda Scripca Poet Haiku

Bald Urge

Disoriented dreams
Freedom without snowcapped tops
Artificial hunt.

Horizontal wish
Waiting feather tips to grow
It is not too late!


for Carolyn's contest "Bald Eagle Contest"
My metaphorical interpretation of the picture

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Poet Destroyer A November 14, 2010 at 2:12 AM enjoyed your poem,..have a nice one,..p.d.

Robert A. Dufresne November 10, 2010 at 2:09 AM a hearty congratulations to you Iolanda on your unique take and a fine win! and thank you

Audrey Haick October 14, 2010 at 10:13 PM Dear Iolanda, my congratulations on your deserving win in the contest. ...Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2010 at 7:42 PM I really like how you approached it, Iolanda. Congratulations!

Carrie Richards October 14, 2010 at 6:50 PM Lovely, Iolanda!! so glad to see this in the winners lineup!!! Well deserved!

John Freeman October 14, 2010 at 5:39 PM Congratulations Iolanda, on your poem's top ten placement. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick October 14, 2010 at 2:38 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Wilma Neels October 14, 2010 at 12:50 PM Iolanda congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest! Love Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown October 14, 2010 at 12:19 PM Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

James Fraser October 14, 2010 at 12:12 PM Many congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James

Skat A October 13, 2010 at 6:48 PM WONDERFUL ISOLANDA, ENJOYED YOUR ENTRY. THE BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST*luv~SKAT

Wilma Neels October 10, 2010 at 12:28 PM Great line you start your second haiku off with Iolanda. Good luck for Carolyn's contest with this gem ;)

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2010 at 8:25 AM Cool line: horizontal wish!! YOu are an artist, Iolanda. Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta October 9, 2010 at 8:31 AM Very nice haiku on the theme of the bald eagles, Iolanda

Audrey Haick October 8, 2010 at 10:14 PM Good luck in the contest, Iolanda....I've seen some really great entries and this is one of them! Love, Audrey

Larry Belt October 8, 2010 at 9:08 PM Great write Iolanda good luck in the contest....Larry