Bald Urge

Disoriented dreams
Freedom without snowcapped tops
Artificial hunt.

Horizontal wish
Waiting feather tips to grow
It is not too late!


for Carolyn's contest "Bald Eagle Contest"
My metaphorical interpretation of the picture

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/14/2010 2:12:00 AM
enjoyed your poem,..have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 11/10/2010 2:09:00 AM
a hearty congratulations to you Iolanda on your unique take and a fine win! and thank you
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Date: 10/14/2010 10:13:00 PM
Dear Iolanda, my congratulations on your deserving win in the contest. ...Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/14/2010 7:42:00 PM
I really like how you approached it, Iolanda. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/14/2010 6:50:00 PM
Lovely, Iolanda!! so glad to see this in the winners lineup!!! Well deserved!
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Date: 10/14/2010 5:39:00 PM
Congratulations Iolanda, on your poem's top ten placement. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/14/2010 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:50:00 PM
Iolanda congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest! Love Wilma
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest Iolanda. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:12:00 PM
Many congratulations Iolanda on your win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 10/13/2010 6:48:00 PM
WONDERFUL ISOLANDA, ENJOYED YOUR ENTRY. THE BEST OF LUCK IN THE CONTEST*luv~SKAT
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Date: 10/10/2010 12:28:00 PM
Great line you start your second haiku off with Iolanda. Good luck for Carolyn's contest with this gem ;)
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Date: 10/10/2010 8:25:00 AM
Cool line: horizontal wish!! YOu are an artist, Iolanda. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/9/2010 8:31:00 AM
Very nice haiku on the theme of the bald eagles, Iolanda
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Date: 10/8/2010 10:14:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, Iolanda....I've seen some really great entries and this is one of them! Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:08:00 PM
Great write Iolanda good luck in the contest....Larry
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