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Bald Spot

Now what’s the matter with my hair? It’s thinning balding -–such despair As buddies jest that I’m ‘top gone’ With strands flaking one by one. The barber whips piles of spray net Yet coif flops, this manhood upset While I grab the latest toupee And style a bob which looks like hay! Meanwhile, gals I need to attract Believes new shave is a cool act... With pierced ears studded, I am grand Jigging on like a hip-hop band! Dear me, today, life's all brand new Nobody peeps at my head's view. For Barry Stebbings’ Contest Oh Dear, What Can The Matter Be 2/13/2018

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Date: 2/16/2018 10:04:00 AM
This was grand humor, Nette. It had me swiveling in my chair w/laughter. Such a neo-cool poem. Your poetic style bridge generations well. Magnificent work of poetic art. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 2/13/2018 7:03:00 PM
that was a fun read - good luck in the contest
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Date: 2/13/2018 6:34:00 AM
Great take on the contest Nette..
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Date: 2/12/2018 1:39:00 PM
you captured the mood of some, I never really understood it, I am one who had hair to my shoulders now I can count the strands, You are who you are and appearances come from within not out...heck I use to run like a deer, now I walk like a turtle...my avatar was taken when I was 62, now I'm 67...good luck my friend
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Date: 2/12/2018 11:29:00 AM
You describe well the crisis men face with hair loss..men will do a lot for vanity..well depicted, nette..best for a win.
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