Bait Fishing

Cool breeze Payne’s grey sky
Night lit by a harvest moon
Two red bobbers bounce

By: Robb A. Kopp
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Loving Iii Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 3:23 PM
if it wasn't so cold. i'd go. john
Kendrick Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Sounds like it could be a good night catching a big catch. Keep the descriptive and creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara
Culverhouse Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 2:25 PM
enjoyed reading today, I like payne's grey, I am tired of the cold breeze!! you can have it.
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2010 at 2:13 PM
You remind me of the nights I spent fishing from my boat on the St. Marks river. Seeing the "red bobbers bounce" always meant there would be fish for dinner. Terrific senryu that brought back wonderful times. Thanks! Love, Carolyn
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