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Bait Fishing

Cool breeze Payne’s grey sky Night lit by a harvest moon Two red bobbers bounce By: Robb A. Kopp

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John Loving Iii

Date: 2/18/2010 3:23:00 PM

if it wasn't so cold. i'd go. john

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2010 2:50:00 PM

Sounds like it could be a good night catching a big catch. Keep the descriptive and creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/18/2010 2:25:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, I like payne's grey, I am tired of the cold breeze!! you can have it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2010 2:13:00 PM

You remind me of the nights I spent fishing from my boat on the St. Marks river. Seeing the "red bobbers bounce" always meant there would be fish for dinner. Terrific senryu that brought back wonderful times. Thanks! Love, Carolyn