Dalila Agtani Poet Free verse

Bahay Kubo Ii

BAHAY KUBO II

Bahay Kubo Part II
Built exclusively for us
A place and time to go
Destined to share happiness 
With you!

This Bahay Kubo
Simply small for two
Made of native and light materials
Everything practically installed
For a living full of faith and love.

Bahay Kubo 
Intended for privacy and rest
Also for the family and playground for grandkids
For recreation and reflections
And viewing the beautiful sunset.

An unforgettable site to hyde
Plan for the future
Solve problems
Share the fullness of love
And seek solitude with
God’s Omnipotence,  Guidance and Love!


Term:  Bahay Kubo - Tagalog word for a small hut

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Dr.Ram Mehta June 30, 2011 at 3:24 PM Very surprising word kubo, we in Gujarat State of India call a small hut a kubo, Dalila

Kabuteng P.Ink K. June 30, 2011 at 8:59 AM Enjoyed reading your part 2, Dalila :) I liked how you extol the different side of the bahay kubo here, for "privacy and rest" this time around-- and thank you for your lovely comments & for your concern, my headache's gone -- I slept after I commented here and I am better (haha maybe I need more chocolate) and yay that you know how to center now, never too late indeed :D btw sending you soupmail

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 7:48 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Dalila. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 30, 2011 at 5:08 AM luv the privacy part Dalila.. a great write on the getaway notion everyone wants to experience luv.. sounds dynamic like a fantasy ..u have make the Bahay Kubo super inviting .. luv that last line.. an elegant write my friend..luv..

Nette Onclaud June 30, 2011 at 2:54 AM i love this part 2, dalila.. i may be biased but i cherish the first one more ( you know why!)... still, a real delightful piece; we don;t have a lot of this now.. only in remote areas in the provinces... hope you'll come over soon! :) huggs, nette