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Baggy Pants

Show them what rebellion means, wear your blue faded denim jeans halfway down your sexy **** showing off your free swingin boxers. Feel a breeze in the crotch down at the knees, take a step and watch them jeans botch sliding down to your oxfords. D o w n w D o w n w D o w n w a r d towards two left feet with the beat of the music, glide and bend down with a thud and pick them up sexy stud. Start all over again; it happens quite fast.
5/31/2018 inspired by Andrea Dietrich, "Jiggle pants dance"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/14/2018 11:33:00 AM
Big smile! Congratulations on your win with this fun dance poem!
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Date: 6/11/2018 9:53:00 AM
Swinging back with BIG congratulations on your win, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/10/2018 6:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, very clever and sounds fun. :))
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Date: 6/9/2018 11:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win with your fun poem, Eve.
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Date: 6/8/2018 10:42:00 AM
Oh what a witty depiction of the baggy pants - LOL! I see them all the time some walking like penguins (not at all sexy), pulling on their belt straps, trying to keep them from falling down to their knees - hehehehe! This piece will surely do very well in Andrea's contest! Best regards and hugs. Pandita
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:52:00 AM
Enjoyed...and have been absolutely entertained, Eve:) Now-a-days I see all sorts wearing jeans; many of them have a hard job keeping them on. My granddaughter was worried because she tripped and tore her jeans at the knee....others buy them ready torn, and pay extra for it!! Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/1/2018 11:53:00 AM
At least you didn't shimmy like Andrea, funny stuff Eve...
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Date: 6/1/2018 6:16:00 AM
haha.. good one Eve..
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Date: 6/1/2018 1:48:00 AM
Haha good one Eve, call me old fashioned but can't understand that fashion and torn jeans, what's that about.
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Date: 6/1/2018 12:39:00 AM
LOL this is so good eve!!!! Loved it!
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Date: 5/31/2018 11:28:00 PM
Nice little grove once you can get back up...All the best Eve
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Date: 5/31/2018 9:43:00 PM
So cute! :)...I just read Andrea's poem...this is great, funny compliment to it!...nice sculpting too :)
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