Jesus De Castro Poet Quatrain

Baggage

I tried to be nice and polite
Last thing I'd do, pick up a fight
Just for today, be out of sight
Not a thing just seems to be right

I can take your dumb, stupid ways
But please stop stepping on my base
Stop making me part of your case
You run yours, I'd run my own race

You always see my brown as beige
Sick of being stuck on your own page
Enough about yours, mind my rage
I've had enough of your baggage

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 9:55 AM Jesus :) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. Hope you had a wonderful Valentines day. ~SKAT LOVE~ Jesus De Castro February 18, 2015 at 3:19 AM Thanks SKAT A for checking out my work! :)

Kp Nunez February 12, 2015 at 3:27 AM Hits where you right between the eyes, kabayan. You're one brave soul to write this piece. Love your quatrain. A 7 for your first piece. Welcome to Soup. It's a community of talented, caring people. Enjoy a cuppa each day... Kim :) Jesus De Castro February 12, 2015 at 9:16 AM Salamat Kim! I'm happy to be part of people like me who nurture this gift. :) Kp Nunez February 12, 2015 at 5:33 AM Sorry for the typo. Was trying to edit but system won't allow me.

Tiffany Franklin February 9, 2015 at 12:27 AM hey whats up I just want to let you know that your poem hits home the really good creative piece I like it Jesus De Castro February 11, 2015 at 8:14 AM Thanks for reading my work, Tiffany. I really dunno but angst has always been my springboard and eventually has become my comfort zone in creating my quatrains.