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Lost youth future unsure. 

Bag Of Unwanted Bones

The hourglass is almost empty
The candle was almost spent
The compass only points one way
The clock is about to strike twelve
My stopwatch doesn't work anymore
The mirror tells me lies
I no longer know who the stranger is
My bed isn't so comfortable anymore
The picture on the wall has faded
With little definition like it used to before
Even my teeth are not real
My Spectacles I repaired with a bandaid
The family and friends don't phone anymore
Or  knock on my door
I feel like a bag of useless bones
So long ago now it seems like only yesterday
But a century ago
My bones were useful back then
I took my time and youth for granted
Too busy chasing girls and drinking in bars
Worked my back off like a mule
Muscles tempered strong and raw Braun
After years of labour in the steelworks
The old places I used to know and go
Either boarded up or knocked down
Echos of the past haunt my mind as I reflect on all the fun we had
Back then when things were simpler than today
My heart yearns as those memories burn inside
I can no longer look forward to the future
As I have none it belongs to the Young
Living in a world of chaos war suffering and crime
In a world I no longer understand
I left my heart in the past of yesterday 
And just exist today alone a useless bag of old bones.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 3/20/2024 1:17:00 AM
The pain of old age is felt in the lines.
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/20/2024 2:40:00 AM
Yes, lots of pain. No one wants to get old. I feel for those who are in this world Loneliness in general is an epidemic, even in younger people. Thank you. Best wishes. Pete.
Date: 3/19/2024 4:00:00 PM
I hear you loud and clear Peter!! And relate totally... its such a different world a complicated one! I miss the simplicity of days gone by! Hohum what to do!! Excellent poem! Debx
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/19/2024 5:04:00 PM
Hi Deb you're too kind. Strange how a poem starts and then goes in a different direction. I'm in a similar situation but not that old. Concerned about the world, and my micro world, I don't feel I live just exist. I'm Sorry you can relate, I think everyone can In some way. Thank you so much it means more to me than you could imagine. Take good care. Pete
Date: 3/19/2024 8:44:00 AM
Hello Peter, What a wonderful reflection on the passage of time and the weight of aging! Your heartfelt words convey a sense of loss and nostalgia for youth's vitality. It's sobering to cherish each moment and appreciate the simple joys of life. I loved your introspective journey with such honesty and depth. - Blessings, Daniel
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Peter Dome
Date: 3/19/2024 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel So glad you enjoyed it . Getting old is such a terrible thing. Take care. Pete.
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