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"Bag o’ sweets" like fantales chewed slowly the concept of what’s left sucks on the sweet marrow of it sticky caramel pages stuck in between flowers pressing the parallax pollen view of it never hallowed the wrappers flimsy, quaint short stories unwrapped violet crumbles pollinated footprints left like scorched fingerprints melting moments spooning the soothing of deep thinking honeytraps candy years worn like necklaces loved and worshipped like crucifixes (LadyLabyrinth / 2023)

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Date: 8/10/2023 3:06:00 AM
"Ladies" (Fetch the Bolt Cutters)/Fiona Apple
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Date: 8/10/2023 3:21:00 AM
LYRICS/"Ladies", Fiona Apple https://genius.com/Fiona-apple-ladies-lyrics
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Date: 8/10/2023 3:07:00 AM
https://youtu.be/n46e8m2pOAw

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