Bad Stars

Poets speak of them as folly, of love itself, 
they say, “Stars are the windows of Heaven” 

in their ignorance they cannot see 
that stars are the fireflies of Hell. 

Stars shine from distant dark with the illusion 
of emotion, yet are indifferent to pity. 

Like pieces of shook foil confetti 
cast over head, in the nuptials of devils. 

Evil stars are eyes that probe through skin. 
They blink in that all-knowing way 

you can feel them like Dante’s inferno, 
burning into your psyche from above. 
. 
Stars see all, even in the dimness. They cast 
illumination where it should be forbidden. 

Flinging light through the hearts of men, 
measuring mans weakness, their hidden sins. 

They are determent to spy on the spirit; 
on the fortitude of the essence of existence. 

They are evil, and eager to scout out souls 
for their demon master, his all-knowing eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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February 18, 2010 at 9:21 AM
wow this poem was brilliant i have never heard stars spoken of in that light and it was refreshing i love it when a writer takes an old or over used topic and writes a completely unique perpsective on it. the line evil stars are eyes that probe through skin i loved and i even refered to them as eyes in my poem 'the sacred art of dying' i really really enjoyed your poetry today!=)jo
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