Bad Review
We was never meant to be, that is a fact.
Walked out that door & I'm never coming back.
Threw away my phone and got a new number.
You couldnt see it coming cause you was in a slumber.
All about you, you was really self centered.
Now you sleep alone, ya summers cold like the winter.
Don't wanna work it out, somethings we cant mend.
Wont pass you on, wont tell a friend.
0 out of 10, I don't recommend.
Round of applause, this is the end.
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