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angels' breath

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Bad Breath of Angel Hair

The whiff of angel hair untidy
reeks a reft of detritus
with showers of glitter, confetti
raining down torrential,
on poesy of angel breath petals
amongst the roses, daffodils 
and daisy chains
written on a page
cheered on by a sage,
succumbed by
the celebrant's rage
to breath excess 
on angel's stage.
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