Bad Aim

I've smashed the heck out of my thumb
I can't believe I am so dumb
My wife says it's so sad
That my hammering is so bad
I guess I need more rum
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Laurie Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 6:14 PM
G'day Timothy … more rum! to take better aim or to deaden the pain and then add more rum again … and again … and again - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
Mcguire Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Sounds Like a grand plan!
Gauthier Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Yes, sounds like you better stock up on rum, Timothy. LOL
Mcguire Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 10:57 PM
I have nine fingers left
Cunningham Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 3:48 AM
Oops , it won't better your aim but at least it'll numb the pain
Mcguire Avatar
October 4, 2018 at 2:50 PM
Absolutely right!
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