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Bad Aim

I've smashed the heck out of my thumb I can't believe I am so dumb My wife says it's so sad That my hammering is so bad I guess I need more rum

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/15/2018 6:14:00 PM
G'day Timothy … more rum! to take better aim or to deaden the pain and then add more rum again … and again … and again - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/16/2018 12:57:00 AM
Sounds Like a grand plan!
Date: 10/6/2018 8:41:00 PM
Yes, sounds like you better stock up on rum, Timothy. LOL
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/6/2018 10:57:00 PM
I have nine fingers left
Date: 10/4/2018 3:48:00 AM
Oops , it won't better your aim but at least it'll numb the pain
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 10/4/2018 2:50:00 PM
Absolutely right!

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