James Ray Morris Poet Free verse

Bacon - Yum Yum

Quickly the hikers rest with a freshly built                         ----------CAMPFIRE 
One of them flips out his ancient cast iron                         -------- PAN
Soon, fresh smells permeate the woods, something is       --------- FRYING
Having trekked and snacked on dates and raisins, so        ---------- TASTY
Smiles now appear  as they now sample  			    --------- BACON

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Sara Kendrick April 24, 2010 at 6:24 AM Great end-line write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 3, 2010 at 6:01 PM Dear James, Sincere Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Win In Dane Ann's First Ever " End Line Word " Contest "Bacon - Yum Yum" is the very Essence of this New Form Excellent Message in the body End Words meld well with Thank-YOU for YOUR Support and Participation in Dane and my Efforts to Establish This New Form of POETRY YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG

Jared Pickett March 3, 2010 at 9:53 AM Congrats on this End-line.... Keep em comin' my friend....:JP}

Jimmy Anderson March 2, 2010 at 1:21 PM Hey James, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf. ..Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2010 at 11:11 AM Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest James. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa March 2, 2010 at 1:19 AM Clever work, James. My congratulations on your winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.

Caroline Cécile Delacroix March 1, 2010 at 10:19 PM Congrats on your win in the contest. A very tasty poem! :) Thanks for sharing and best wishes, Caroline.

John Freeman March 1, 2010 at 5:28 PM Congratulations on your win Jame. Agape, Moses

March 1, 2010 at 5:27 PM Sounds like a good time. You have me smiling with you. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Dane Ann's contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 1, 2010 at 5:01 PM Congratulations James, for your success in my contest! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Marty Owens March 1, 2010 at 4:56 PM Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 1, 2010 at 4:30 PM Congrats James on your winning poem and placement in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a terrific write and a wonderful win for u to enjoy..luv..Linda-Marie..

Carolyn Devonshire March 1, 2010 at 2:49 PM Delicious! Congratulations on your success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown March 1, 2010 at 11:30 AM It was a pleasure to read your poetry today James. Please continue with your writing and keep sharing it with us. I wish you the best if you entered this in Dane's End Line Word Contest. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse February 28, 2010 at 5:59 PM I can smell it, good write!!

Susan Palli February 28, 2010 at 1:27 PM Would love to be there

Audrey Haick February 28, 2010 at 1:26 PM Oh, this is good, James! You are good! Thanks for this delightful, tasty End Line Word Poem. Believing it's for the contest, I wish you good luck! Peace, Audrey

Charmaine Chircop February 28, 2010 at 1:09 PM Delicious,I can smell the scent..yummy..Charma