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Backwash

The backwash reflection
sent waves seawards
to crash headlong
into the oncoming waves
sending swash and spray skywards.
It was fun to go careering out 
and ride the surge, and get upshot
as the two waves met and banged together.
The afterglow of backwash aftereffect
was exhilarating that afternoon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Amadore Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 10:39 AM
I enjoyed the word picture, which reminded me of frolicking (antique word, no?) in an afternoon agitated surf years ago......those stimulating repeated douses from long ago were almost reawakened by your words. Thank you.
Gauthier Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 6:48 AM
Beautiful vivid imagery, John.
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