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Backwards Tow

Our backsides don’t see the stars the seeds of our eyes hypnotized mesmerized suspenser on the flapping sheet etchings of a classic flick moths flutter and cling seeing shadows drawing ever nearer on the grassy knoll sunflower eyes expand as the sea explodes and Brody’s one hundredth pronouncement stunned and slow backwards tow “We’re gonna need a bigger boat…” 7/8/2019

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Date: 7/8/2019 7:57:00 PM
This is just delightful. You have such a wonderful way of stylizing the overlooked events of a day, Kim. I can read this again and again. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2019 8:33:00 PM
Thanks so much! I just love that scene! Be blessed, sweet friend!

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