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Backwards

Feet weary walking in reverse retracing finding wisdom by treading through dried muddy footprints blood stained memories lessons relearned forlorn tears cleanse painful yet needed now moving forward feet 7/23/16

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/16/2016 11:27:00 AM

Dineen, "dried muddy footprints blood stained memories"... loved these lines, well done...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/29/2016 2:24:00 PM

Hi Dineen, i am with Connie in the fact i found it too difficult for me. I did try but it was a disaster. This reads excellent Dinnen. I wish you well in the contest. Like Connie, i think your write will do well. I give this one a seven and i fave it also also Dineen. A well thought out piece....Mike.

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 7/30/2016 12:54:00 PM

Thanks a million for such kind comments. I was over thinking this write, and did much better once I heeded Laura's directions. Finally decided to stop trying to perfect it and just write.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/28/2016 4:22:00 PM

This is impressive Dineen! This form was too difficult for me. Your entry should do well in the contest. 7 ; )

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 7/30/2016 12:51:00 PM

Quite kind of you to say Connie, thank very much. I had more than a few starts and stops, over thinking it. Laura's instructions and examples were great, once I focused on those and just started writing the form flowed much better. .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2016 1:36:00 PM

you did this brilliantly, Dineen. One I have not tried yet!!!

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 7/25/2016 5:49:00 PM

Not the easiest form Andrea, such a kind comment, thanks a million!

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/24/2016 10:55:00 AM

An encouraging poem my friend beautifully done. Good luck in the contest, bl

Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 7/25/2016 10:09:00 AM

I thank you for your encouraging comment BL, your support is appreciated much.