Backseat Lovers

moon illuminates     
a two headed conversion 
backseat excursion 
arms extended fully entwined
a steamy window tonight         

Copyright © 2011 By Caryl S. Muzzey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

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Wesley Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 5:50 PM
I guess it happens to everybody - well done, I enjoyed.
Ramage Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 7:54 PM
Great poem. Lee
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 9:01 PM
ooh la la. What a summer poem! I hope it does well in the contest, Caryl.
Henderson Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:49 AM
Yes, Caryl, I can remember those days- -barely. Good description
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 5:11 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Caryl. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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July 12, 2011 at 3:28 PM
ah shades of when I was a teenager Caryl.. great lines of vibrant imagery .. good luck in the contest my friend.. luv that backseat excursion..oh how bad I am..haha..
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