Backlight

Approaching to me
Divine in the backlighting
She is more splendid



Controluce (italian version)

Lei si avvicina
Divina in controluce
È più splendente

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Date: 11/7/2014 9:56:00 PM
I like this and the fact that you used two languages. Love haiku. Let me see some more!!!
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Mario De Paz
Date: 11/8/2014 5:27:00 AM
Dear Andrea, thanks for the kind words. These times I am very busy in translating Dante's masterpiece Divina Commedia into your language with rhyming and little time to visit other poets, but to see and hear from you is always good
Date: 9/2/2013 3:51:00 PM
beautiful poem.The italian version so.very romantic
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Mario De Paz
Date: 11/8/2014 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Charmaine, and excuse me for responding so late, but I am actually working hard to translate in rhyming verses the Divina Commedia and I am so busy indeed....
Date: 9/2/2013 11:04:00 AM
- A beautiful gem in both Languages, Mario ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mario De Paz
Date: 11/8/2014 5:32:00 AM
Dear Anne-Lise, thank you for kind commenting. I know I am late in responding but, as evident, I am very busy. Better late then never! :-))
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