Backlight

Approaching to me Divine in the backlighting She is more splendid Controluce (italian version) Lei si avvicina Divina in controluce È più splendente

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2014 9:56:00 PM

I like this and the fact that you used two languages. Love haiku. Let me see some more!!!

Mario De Paz
Date: 11/8/2014 5:27:00 AM

Dear Andrea, thanks for the kind words. These times I am very busy in translating Dante's masterpiece Divina Commedia into your language with rhyming and little time to visit other poets, but to see and hear from you is always good

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/2/2013 3:51:00 PM

beautiful poem.The italian version so.very romantic

Mario De Paz
Date: 11/8/2014 5:29:00 AM

Thank you, Charmaine, and excuse me for responding so late, but I am actually working hard to translate in rhyming verses the Divina Commedia and I am so busy indeed....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/2/2013 11:04:00 AM

- A beautiful gem in both Languages, Mario ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Mario De Paz
Date: 11/8/2014 5:32:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, thank you for kind commenting. I know I am late in responding but, as evident, I am very busy. Better late then never! :-))