Backlight

Approaching to me
Divine in the backlighting
She is more splendid



Controluce (italian version)

Lei si avvicina
Divina in controluce
È più splendente

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Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2014 at 9:56 PM

I like this and the fact that you used two languages. Love haiku. Let me see some more!!!

Mario De Paz

November 8, 2014 at 5:27 AM

Dear Andrea, thanks for the kind words. These times I am very busy in translating Dante's masterpiece Divina Commedia into your language with rhyming and little time to visit other poets, but to see and hear from you is always good

Charmaine Chircop

September 2, 2013 at 3:51 PM

beautiful poem.The italian version so.very romantic

Mario De Paz

November 8, 2014 at 5:29 AM

Thank you, Charmaine, and excuse me for responding so late, but I am actually working hard to translate in rhyming verses the Divina Commedia and I am so busy indeed....