Backflips

Lately, in my dreams
I'm doing backflips
On trampolines
Vaulting higher than high
Bouncing off
The springy sky
Free from gravity
Of worry
As the ground
Falls off my feet

I careen
To the beat 
Of tambourines
Tail lashing
Lavender flashing
Pom-pom sized
Orange eyes
I'm as free
As I want to be
Lately, in my dreams.

5/08/19

Entered in 'Dial It Back' contest
Judged 6/5/19

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/31/2019 8:10:00 PM
This brought me back to my childhood. I used to jump on the trampoline for hours. A really fun and happy poem. SuZ
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Date: 5/15/2019 12:56:00 AM
This makes me feel light, lovely, and like I am flying, whirling, twirling and delighting in life!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/15/2019 10:57:00 PM
I felt the same way when I wrote this :)
Date: 5/14/2019 7:48:00 AM
Whew, I am worn out after all that jumping around. Nevertheless, quite a lively, cute pen.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/14/2019 2:52:00 PM
Yep, good for the heart!
Date: 5/10/2019 11:37:00 AM
A very happy poem Michelle - perhaps taking you back to a memory charged childhood - its such a wonderful description of feeling care free - good luck in the contest! Hugs, Jennifer
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/12/2019 2:30:00 PM
Your comments make me happy, thanks, Jennifer!
Date: 5/10/2019 5:39:00 AM
I love this, Michelle. Talk about a wonderful flow...a winner for sure in my books. Very well done...CM :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/12/2019 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, much appreciated-
Date: 5/9/2019 11:50:00 AM
oh what fun! Great idea for this prompt. I think you have a winner here!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/9/2019 11:58:00 AM
Thanks for your cheery comment, P.S!
Date: 5/9/2019 4:05:00 AM
I want to join you in your dreams for awhile! Sounds like fun.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/9/2019 11:57:00 AM
Sometimes I feel I have more fun in dreamland!
Date: 5/8/2019 8:33:00 PM
Wonderful, wonderful, Michelle! If dreams are the repository of our hopes and our secret desires, then you have a rich treasure-house awaiting you! So cheery-breezy-airily penned and rhymed! Blessings, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/9/2019 11:55:00 AM
Actually, I don't usually remember my dreams, but sometimes, when I wake up, I feel like I almost remember - so glad for your comments, they always cheer me up!
Date: 5/8/2019 6:14:00 PM
So what is holding you back when you are awake? Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/9/2019 11:53:00 AM
Gravity! :)
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