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this 
liminal
           utopia
a vapid
         vapour
implodes
          before our
eyes:

we stand 
            fixated
in gravitas,
             the sublime
in retreat,
        our mood blunt:
in fugitive mode
we clutch at hope
naked
      in our essence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Enriquez Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Dear Brian: Lovely touch you have here. Nice soft pulse that stillness makes loud. Leon
Strand Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Thanks so much Leon
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