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this 
liminal
           utopia
a vapid
         vapour
implodes
          before our
eyes:

we stand 
            fixated
in gravitas,
             the sublime
in retreat,
        our mood blunt:
in fugitive mode
we clutch at hope
naked
      in our essence

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Date: 11/1/2017 10:25:00 AM
Dear Brian: Lovely touch you have here. Nice soft pulse that stillness makes loud. Leon
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Brian Strand
Date: 11/1/2017 11:14:00 AM
Thanks so much Leon

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