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I want to go back Back to when I was slim and trimmed And all I knew was fun fun fun! Back to when I had no worries and loved many stories Back to when no one told me my flaws And I had no idea I was so small and short! Back to when running a mile didnt seem like a chore I want to go back then I want to go back Back to when school wasnt a task When it hardly mattered if you read When it was like putting through the hole of a pin,a thread Back to those delicious yam porridge That got you spending with all pleasure and courage Back to those dance routines That had me feeling like I was a part of something Back to building those sand castles And driving mum crazy trying to make waffles I want to go back then

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Date: 4/15/2017 3:38:00 PM
Hi Iveren, beautiful write , my poem feelings is different but similar :) happy Easter hugs from Ireland
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Date: 3/6/2016 8:39:00 PM
well done. LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2016 9:17:00 PM
IVEREN, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
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Date: 4/22/2014 6:53:00 AM
Sadly, time is on a one way street and there is no reversing. I like this one. Actually, I did a piece of my own called Topsy-turvy. I even turned it into a song: What if now was yesterday And things are the way they were then Would I be what I am today Or would I be what I was back then? Once again, great piece Iveren
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Date: 9/23/2013 4:01:00 PM
Nostalgia galore!
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Date: 4/23/2013 7:10:00 AM
Nice piece superbly presented. I often times trade through the same path myself. Keep on writing.
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Date: 2/1/2013 1:58:00 AM
Lovely write, my dear! I have walked down memory lane countless times and it always seems better back then! Thanks for the visit and for sharing this lovey piece with us! Hugs!
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Date: 1/27/2013 5:02:00 PM
this is full of sincere emotion and nostalgia for good times. I love it.
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Date: 1/27/2013 3:29:00 PM
What a great piece of Nostalgia. I wonder if one day you will look at today and feel a similar way about now. The further we are away, the better it seems to have been.
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Date: 1/27/2013 11:26:00 AM
yeah, from the unconscious back to the conscious. That's poetry in the making. That feelings always came knocking at your mind. Wonderful work. I felt the spice in this work.
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Date: 1/27/2013 11:18:00 AM
if only we could turn back the hands of time.....nicely penned Iveren....thanks for stopping by...
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