Back Talking

Who cares?
Is anyone out there who cares?
Is anyone out there?

This abysmal echo – 
it stares.
The void from peak to peak
talks back.
The scream never hits bottom.
The voracious valley never speaks.

Who cares?
Is anyone out there who cares?
Is anyone out there?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 4:58 PM
I care and will continue to do so despite the evil and violence that seems to have engulfed our country and the world. I also care about you :-) Merry Christmas
Hind Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:14 PM
I care. I care that you never stop writing.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:35 PM
You are such an awesome friend! I appreciate you so!
Wolf Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 8:51 PM
Chilling, Kim... 394 murders in Chicago through November, 2025. And that's down some from the last few years...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 11, 2025 at 2:56 AM
Awful! Even 1 is too many!
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