Back Pain

I sit here with lower back pain
Need to see the doctor
Con…….
 …………sti………
 ……………..pationnnnah driving me insane






*don't know if it would be classed as a grook, never wriiten one before*
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July 10, 2010 at 7:07 PM
Very funny write, has me tied in knots. I'd have to look up a grook to see if this is one or not, but it was funny.
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July 10, 2010 at 6:54 PM
Got a great laugh from your poem, Sidney. Most of us haven't written grooks before, but it certainly was fun reading yours. Love, Carolyn
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