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Back In the Saddle Samurai Part 2 Response To Richard Pickett Collab

After hearing from Brick over the phone saying he needed a lift, Bill cradled the phone, adjusted his shoulder holster, slipped on his jacket and carefully donned his beloved Stetson. He skipped down the stairs to the mini parking lot where he recently paid to park his car just for the convenience of it all. Should a done this a long time ago, he thought as he coaxed his car into gear and popped the clutch to angle it onto the busy street. Once he got into the traffic he ground the gears as well as that old three speed on the column would allow and headed for St Cecelia’s. He probably would have got there quicker on his police horse but they frowned on him parking his old horse buddy in the parking lot. It wasn’t the first time Brick decided to take a sabbatical in St Cecelia‘s. Hmm ..He musta been hell on his Mom’s nerves when he was a kid, Bill mused. He pulled a u turn couldn't help but smile when he saw Brick was already standing there waiting for him while removing a sling from his arm that he probably was supposed to leave on for a few days. Bill braked along side the cigarette butt strewn curb reached across, opened the door and Brick clambered in a little more gently than he wanted to. “Need some help old man?” Bill quipped. “No I just happen to like taking my time so I can savor every moment when I climb into a piece of junk.” “Now that ain’t no way to talk about ole Nellie here, Bill chuckled. Say how ya feeling Brick? “I feel great.” “Oh? You might feel great but you look like crap. You’d best pull an overhaul on your carcass real soon or that’ll be the shortest date you’ll ever be on.” Brick rolled his eyes at his partner “Don’t you worry none cowboy, I clean up pretty good when I wanna. You just try and do your best to see that this hunk of junk makes it to my place cause if I was a gambling man ,I wouldn’t put any money on it.” They both laughed and Bill drove Brick to his home. “Okay, well call me tomorrow and we’ll talk business about a certain Samurai if your up to it by then Brick.” Brick groaned his way out of the car turned and said “Oh don’t you worry ’bout that. I’ll be up to it all right .” Actually, I ain't really worried about you, Brick. I’m a little worried about the Samurai.” “Huh? How’s that Bill?” “You know .. your ribs, Brick … they gave his foot a pretty good walloping!” Brick slammed the car door shut, shook his head and chuckled as he limped away. See Richard Pickett

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/6/2011 2:26:00 PM
Interesting work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 9/6/2011 2:59:00 PM
Well, you have me smiling I missed these narratives, a good read before bedtime ;) okay now I need to check on Richard to see if there is a follow up yet ;) Keep them coming Bob and I will keep on reading them ;) love wilma
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Date: 9/6/2011 8:08:00 AM
ok Buddy, you asked for it...I should post today....Good to see Brick and Bill still got it....God Bless...Your Pardner...Taz
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Date: 9/5/2011 5:53:00 PM
Rob, you and Richard really have it "going on" with these narratives. Now I guess I'll have to wait and seee what happens next. Richard left a comment on one of my poems. Both of you have been so kind to me. Thanks for your friendship and support. Please let me know when the next part of "Back in the Saddle Samurai" is posted! Love, Carolyn
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