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Back In Please

In a parking space in an underground parking garage A wall sign read, “BACK IN PLEASE”, thought it was a mirage If I entered that small space Depending on which way I faced I'd never again be free to roam the fields wearing a corsage

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/28/2019 7:37:00 AM

This isn't going to be on the driver's test is it? I am SO talented, when I was taking Driver's Ed, I stalled my instructor's automatic three times learning to parallel park. Apparently, that's hard to do ;) Good Morning! xomo <3

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/28/2019 8:07:00 AM

LOL!!!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/28/2019 8:01:00 AM

Memories of Sesame Street... "One way... The sign said one way..." ;)

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/28/2019 7:57:00 AM

Hmmm "stalled an automatic three times"!!! That's really hard to do! XOX

Jack Ellison
Date: 6/28/2019 7:43:00 AM

LOL, Actually there's a guy in there that has never been able to leave!!! Each time he tried, the sign said: "back in please"!!! Good morning my sweet love, Happy Jack XOX