Back At One

While granules from past season’s flakes thaw the impatience of my own caprice amidst the restlessness of mid-winter, clay gathers new fragrance of tangy moss. Back at one, infant stars bequeath light upon clouds resting on a drape of reverie, the music of firstborn days stirring the wake of garnet’s ardour with time’s new dial--- a little fiery perhaps---as opposed to the acrid taste of a cycle’s old debris-- allowing this new ambrosia to ressurect me from the scab of past undoing.
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Hello January Contest by nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Phookan Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 8:28 AM
"the kind which blesses fire and ice".. Splendid writing! Congratulations nette on all your wins, you deserve! hugs and smiles...
Garg Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 2:31 AM
I liked your expressions. Congrats on the win, nette.
Mehta Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Enjoyed your expressions on January and congrats on the win, nette
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 2:15 PM
- Hello January, contest is judged / / Sponsored by: Vicky Tsiluma - Congratulations on your winning poem,Nette. - Nice to take part - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 1:46 PM
"a cycle's old debris".........wow......I loved that line depicting what has gone before. Excellent work here!! Well done, dear Nette!
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 11:11 AM
Wow, Nette! I absolutely LOVE this. Your picturesque description of your own emotions painted through the nature. Eloquently written. Enjoyed greatly!
Tsiluma Avatar
January 20, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Beautifully done Nette! I have no words to express your brilliance. Just beautiful!
Austin Avatar
January 13, 2014 at 10:15 AM
A rhapsody of faith and hope - something new from nette? LOVe, daver
Mohammed Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Wow really beautiful Nette. Well done!
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 5:15 PM
BTW, someone told me your birthday was like the 8th?? Is that true? So sorry if it was and I missed it, Nette. A belated Happy Birthday to you. It must make you a Capricorn!
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 5:14 PM
gosh you made January seem so wonderful, Nette. I can't stand that month and I have no idea how to do this challenge. Anyway, VERY nicely done!!! I am sure this will do well in the contest.
Melugin Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 2:40 PM
A mosaic of magnificence, Nette! Hugs, chuck
Gasun Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 4:24 PM
A very beautiful poem welcoming the new month my dear friend Nette. If this is a contest, a winner for sure. Thank u so much for sharing. By the way, I'm sorry, I just came at soup now. Just finished our 2day Sports Day. Belated Happy B-day again. Got a poem for u, to be posted soon. Hope u'r doing well. Me, quite sad;((. I'll be back soon. I've to go back to bed. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora
Greece Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 2:06 PM
Your January has a deep, reflective feel, like clearing the weeds and building a strong strand of hope at the end. Take a bow for delivering an excellent, fully-lit piece!
Tacito Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 12:35 PM
"The fertile seeds of renewal with ovules so despicably beautiful"...astounding lines. Riveting emotion & impact on the eyes & soul. Not really a big surprise, though, coming from you. True story. ;-)
Kendrick Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Reads like a January winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..The Male Mockingbird is ruling the over the feed trough this morning..He won't let any other bird near..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 9:28 AM
You are a force of nature Nette!
Hamilton Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 7:11 AM
a poem of love and beauty Nette well written Shadow x smile hug
Sivey Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 11:00 PM
You pose such awesome gratitude for this lovely month of January! I really enjoyed reading this masterful write this evening my dear friend! What a powerful poem you have written Nette! Excellent Work!!
Ongado Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 7:16 PM
Deep expression of transformation with glowimg imagery to go with it.You always mystify, much like this month,Nette.
Guzzi Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 7:01 PM
A very virile January Light & Love
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