Bach

A humble name,
Trilling far beyond river
For his music
Flows into the grandest ocean
Leaving land
Aquiver


-Snaperdoodlyay, Laura Breidenthal
-For Giorgio Veneto's Laconic Verse Contest

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Peter Walsh

Date: 1/27/2014 4:37:00 AM

Love this one Laura X

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/6/2014 11:25:00 AM

A very physical description Laura, A very original one too! Gotta love that harpsicord. J.A.B.

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/19/2013 8:43:00 AM

Love it!! Laura, you are music to my deafness! Merry Christmas, chuck

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/19/2013 2:15:00 PM

This little message made my day : ) Cheers, my friend. And I wish you happiness and content. ~Laura

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 12/6/2013 11:13:00 AM

† Hey Beautiful Laura, I Can Smell The Perfume, Of Your Rose Petals Scent This, Upon The Nap Of Your Beauty's Fragrant Neck: Bite ˜ Smile, Just A Trickle To Taste, Your Poetic Splendour ˜ Emily Dickinson, Marmalade Skies Creamy White, Velvet Clouds Her Light ˜ Happy Holidays ˜ My Love, Always, John

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/19/2013 2:17:00 PM

Thanks John. Your comments are always very poetic and uplifting. I hope you are doing well and have a wonderful 2014. ~Laura

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/3/2013 6:57:00 PM

great write congratulations on your win

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/19/2013 2:17:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to read : ) ~Laura

Kathryn Collins

Date: 12/2/2013 8:43:00 AM

Dear Laura - Bravo! Bach would be proud while each new generation is aquiver. love, Kathy

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/19/2013 2:18:00 PM

I agree (: Thanks a lot. ~Laura

Len Gasun

Date: 12/1/2013 7:12:00 AM

Big congratulations on your super win my dear friend Laura! I love your excellent terse verse. Cheers and hugs! love lots, Leonora

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/19/2013 2:18:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the love. Hope you are doing well. :) ~Laura

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2013 9:45:00 PM

Laura, if I had to choose my favorites of the number ones I have been reading, I think this is it. I just love this one. It's so beautiful and the topic is a delight.

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 12/19/2013 2:19:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. You're very sweet to say that. 8 ) ~Laura