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Slumbering baby's feet rest in a quaint garden, As their youngest member naps peacefully, A wailing baby stirs, ignores looks made silly, After a short while, normalcy weighs-in. An exuberant baby squirms around, As a whimsical garden undress for young sight, That being proffered midst an increased, proper light, Above and under, a baby goes round. Hush, a ladybug takes flight bouncingly, A baby's head progresses upward and around, Venturing to detect the beating sound, A head steadies, a tiny face powdered with glee. Coos, giggles, an orange speck gain the distance, A grinning baby receives the same fate, While some garden remains behind a closing gate, And a sun sinks past a white picket fence. Date: 08/20/2019 Writing Challenge 2, August 2019 - Enclosed Rhyme - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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Date: 8/23/2019 3:51:00 PM
A delightful winning poem William. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/23/2019 12:24:00 PM
William, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your Enclosed Rhyme. Nice write !
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Hilo Poet
Date: 8/23/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thanks, Constance -- I'll soupmail you re your next contest
Date: 8/22/2019 11:37:00 PM
Congratulations William. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/23/2019 2:10:00 PM
Thanks a whole lot ~ William

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