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BabyFace, What's You Thinkin'

O dear god, what's this…!!
Are these really my parents?
What planet am I on?
What did I just get myself into?
Is it too late to go back?



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on December 18, 2018 for contest BABY FACE WHAT'S YOU THINKIN (A) sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR  -  RANKED 1ST
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May Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your win Line!
Gauthier Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Thank you so much, Bobby.
Kiser Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 10:34 AM
I believe that's the thoughts of almost every single Newborn. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:41 PM
LOL more than likely.
Mcguire Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:25 PM
LOL Very Cute
Mcguire Avatar
February 6, 2019 at 7:45 PM
Great win Miss Line!
Gauthier Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 8:41 PM
Thanks, Timothy.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 6:58 PM
Hilarious! I was so thinking exactly the same thing when I saw the number 4 baby's face! Good luck in the contest, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:22 PM
That is hilarious... I guess that "deer in the headlights look" is how I personally react when people tell me unbelievably stupid things...So many times that look is misinterpreted as TELL ME AGAIN... it seems to never fail, they actually repeat the stupidity which leaves me even more dumbfounded. O well...
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 6:46 PM
ha ha ha love it Line!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:23 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Jan.
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