Notes About The Poem

Babycakes

Seriously?
Give me a break! I am not that gullible!
What's this baloney you're trying to feed me?
Most ridiculous story I ever heard!
Do you truly think I was born yesterday?



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 12:40 PM
Hello Lin, way to go girl!!!!!! have a nice day my friend.
Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2019 at 1:08 PM
LOL thanks, Darlene.
Cholt Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Nice conversational/poetical piece. Best wishes for the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Thanks, WA. Most appreciated.
Mcferran Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 4:56 PM
Great (and funny) take on the contest prompt, Line! ;D
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Thanks, Rhona. Most appreciated.
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 2:26 PM
You and I can both relate lol lol:-) just dropped by to respond to a message from a souper friend thought I'd comment on a couple of poems - adding this gem to my faves for so many reasons!:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 8:41 PM
LOL thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.
Romios Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Delightful poem Panagiota
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Thanks, Panagiota. Much appreciated.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 2:57 AM
I was so curious, I had to run to James' contest to see the photograph, and I laughed when I saw it. Yes, you have written the poem that baby number 1 was thinking for sure, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
April 3, 2019 at 7:43 AM
LOL Thanks, Caren.
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