Baby, You Make Me Blue

just one little moment, out of your day
a few seconds, not even that
something that would have taken away my gray
baby, you make me blue

just one little thought, just for me
a few words penned, auto posted
telling me you care, even if you don't
baby, you make me blue

it all piles up, like undone laundry
the hamper overflows, waiting for wash day
one brief line, two words, nothing more
baby, you make me blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 28, 2010 at 7:48 PM
REALLY ENJOYED THIS WRITE, THE FIRST STANZA WAS THE COOLEST, CLEVER AND NICE WRITE
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May 28, 2010 at 5:52 PM
Excellent write, enjoyed the emotional read.
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