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Baby, You Make Me Blue

just one little moment, out of your day a few seconds, not even that something that would have taken away my gray baby, you make me blue just one little thought, just for me a few words penned, auto posted telling me you care, even if you don't baby, you make me blue it all piles up, like undone laundry the hamper overflows, waiting for wash day one brief line, two words, nothing more baby, you make me blue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/28/2010 7:48:00 PM
REALLY ENJOYED THIS WRITE, THE FIRST STANZA WAS THE COOLEST, CLEVER AND NICE WRITE
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Date: 5/28/2010 5:52:00 PM
Excellent write, enjoyed the emotional read.
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