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Baby Talk

Bubbling azure streams Are like grandfathers cooing At newborn infants My first attempt at haiku

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/20/2009 1:45:00 AM
Love it. Sara
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Date: 8/26/2008 3:57:00 PM
as a first time Granddad I suspect I 'babble' more than 'bubble' (laughing)))) This one touched me - nice one! PS perhaps more Senryu than Haiku?
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