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Young mother with her cute little baby on grey background

Her cute smile Touched me deeply So pure We played eye tag Her mother held her Facing me I beamed The baby Wide eye And searching Her new world I wiggled my lips The baby copied me I Left the diner charmed 12/13/22 Writing Challenge - Yalto Form - Poetry Contest Sponsor-Constance La France 2nd

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Date: 1/2/2023 1:38:00 PM
Connie, a lovely Yalto poem. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, I like the image too, Constance
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Date: 12/20/2022 11:02:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Connie :) - I wish you a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/21/2022 4:42:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/20/2022 8:42:00 AM
Way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Sara
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/21/2022 4:41:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/20/2022 1:22:00 AM
Beautiful narration through this short form. Congratulations!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/21/2022 4:40:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/19/2022 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful, heartwarming Yalto, Connie:-) I hope you write more. Congratulations on your win!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/19/2022 9:38:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/14/2022 3:00:00 PM
Grandma pride...lovely visual, CP. =;o]
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/19/2022 12:09:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 12/13/2022 11:49:00 AM
... they are so cute at this age ... lovely written - hugs
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 12/19/2022 12:09:00 AM
Thank you.

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