Notes About The Poem

Young mother with her cute little baby on grey background

Baby Steps

Her cute smile
Touched me deeply
So pure
We played eye tag
Her mother held her
Facing me
I beamed
The baby
Wide eye
And searching
Her new world
I wiggled my lips
The baby copied me
I
Left the diner charmed

12/13/22

Writing Challenge - Yalto Form - Poetry Contest
Sponsor-Constance La France

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La France Avatar
January 2, 2023 at 1:38 PM
Connie, a lovely Yalto poem. And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, I like the image too, Constance
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 11:02 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Connie :) - I wish you a Merry Christmas :) - hugs
Pachecho Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Sara
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December 21, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Thank you.
Alex Avatar
December 20, 2022 at 1:22 AM
Beautiful narration through this short form. Congratulations!
Pachecho Avatar
December 21, 2022 at 4:40 AM
Thank you.
Ibeh Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 4:51 PM
Beautiful, heartwarming Yalto, Connie:-) I hope you write more. Congratulations on your win!
Pachecho Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 9:38 PM
Thank you.
Parker Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 3:00 PM
Grandma pride...lovely visual, CP. =;o]
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December 19, 2022 at 12:09 AM
Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2022 at 11:49 AM
... they are so cute at this age ... lovely written - hugs
Pachecho Avatar
December 19, 2022 at 12:09 AM
Thank you.
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