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July 2019: Me and baby sister, Theadora Clemens with her and her son Sammy's "sister dogs" (or maybe they are brother dogs. Now I forgot!)

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Baby Sister

Three sisters have I who make me so glad,
and all of us have the same mom and dad.

But there is another sister I claim.
Our fathers happen to not be the same.

This sister – the youngest in our family -
is called my half-sister, technically!

No difference this makes though I left home when
she, at that time, was much younger than ten.

As the oldest, I spent so much less time
with her than with other sisters of mine.

Now knowing her better, I have no doubt
that leaving home early,  I really missed out.

I missed all those years when she was in school,
the great things she did, and things she found cool.

Dance lessons my sister took – same as me!
Each other’s recitals we did not see.

I missed out on watching her turn into
a splendid young woman as the years flew.

I ended up living so far away
my kids had no cousins with whom to play.

A few rare reunions in my home state
were times for which I hardly could wait.

My dear baby sister I then got to know.
If only I’d gotten to see her kids grow.

She has a son Sammy whom I adore.
He lives near MY state, so his mom I see more.

When she visits her son out here in the west,
I spend time with her. Those times are the best!

We have much in common, and with our kids grown,
we’ve got lots of time to chat on the phone.

Theadora – though a half-sister – SHE
is in every way a whole sister to ME!


Oct. 23, 2020
NA in the 'From the Heart' Poetry Contest of Regina McIntosh
Now for 'HM's and NA's October 2020' Contest of Constance La France

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Date: 11/8/2020 5:27:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge with this wonderful poem, nice pic _Constance
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Date: 11/6/2020 4:39:00 PM
Aw, Andrea, this is a beautiful tribute to your baby sister, Theadora. Your love-baring heart and poetic pen shines in this lovely piece. I love the pic, you and your sis are so cute.. as are the "sister doggies"! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/26/2020 5:57:00 AM
Beautiful!! It's like a well-defined play. A great winner!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/26/2020 3:44:00 PM
thanks, Newton.
Date: 10/25/2020 11:48:00 AM
You sound very close and that is a wonderful feeling to have. Your doggies look adorable. Hugs and blessings, Good luck in Gina's contest my friend. Jennifer.
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Date: 10/24/2020 5:04:00 AM
Always great when we have good siblings and it seems like you do also...
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Date: 10/24/2020 12:34:00 AM
Cute sister's pic! And the doggies are adorable - is that Olly in your lap?
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John Watt
Date: 10/27/2020 10:28:00 AM
Thanks for letting me know Andrea. I'm pretty sure I've seen a pic of Olly before, I just couldn't remember.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/24/2020 8:09:00 AM
Ollyver was a miniature Eskimo who died years ago before this picture. I can't remember the name of this dog breed that belongs to Sammy and Theadora. Thanks, John.
Date: 10/23/2020 11:03:00 PM
Simple yet emotions profound. Good to be so friendly with a half sister. ~~
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Date: 10/23/2020 8:34:00 PM
Andrea, This poem, a testament to true sisterhood. -Richard
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Date: 10/23/2020 5:04:00 PM
what a lovely tribute, you are so lucky to have such a close bond with her:-) hugs Jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 6:24:00 PM
Jan, I just put our picture. Come back and see.
Date: 10/23/2020 4:22:00 PM
This is charming. Not everybody warms up to their half-sibling but I know that is not a problem for you and Thea. I met my half sister when I was 22 and she was 37!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 6:24:00 PM
come see my picture I just put up
Date: 10/23/2020 3:38:00 PM
A nice familial history in coupler form Pangie
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 6:24:00 PM
come see the picture I just put up, Pangie.
Date: 10/23/2020 1:35:00 PM
Wow Andrea, I would think this beautiful tribute to your sister will bring happy tears to her eyes as it did to mine. This lovely heartfelt entry deserves to be a top winner my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2020 6:25:00 PM
I doubt will be a winner but i owed her a tribute. I put a picture with it just now . Hope you see this and come see my picture.
Date: 10/23/2020 10:35:00 AM
So nice to read.. about your baby sister Andrea... 'kids grown now we have lots of time to chat'... liked it... best wishes and a cheerful day... - hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 10/23/2020 10:24:00 AM
Hi Andrea, This is a nice tribute write to your dear sister. Your last couplet was touching and heartfelt. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/23/2020 10:14:00 AM
Beautiful tribute Andrea Im happy for you that you managed to make contact again. Tom
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