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Baby I Really Miss You

Baby I miss you There is no way I can convey This emptiness inside. I can't explain in words of how I long to feel your touch, Despite the darkness that surround me. I always see a light inside of my heart I can't explain by word It reminds me of your smile And always brighten my day. Even though we are far apart, But I feel you are here with me, You are with my spirit Yet there is no substance, No reality I can touch. I know the distance is far To be exacted, This much I know, but I will be back soon....... Oh! Baby I really miss you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/24/2012 4:49:00 PM
Sweet, sweet .... lovely love poem - missing someone you love it hurts alot. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/25/2012 2:32:00 AM
Thank you dear for your beautiful words.
Date: 3/24/2012 1:21:00 PM
Been dealing with a breakup and really can relate to your message here. The one who is left behind does feel dark and empty. Sometimes those who leave their lovers find the "grass isn't greener" in other pastures. If this is a true write, I hope she returns to you, CD. (Those are my initials too.) Compelling poem! Love, carolyn
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/25/2012 2:31:00 AM
Thank you for your strong and generous review.
Date: 3/24/2012 12:58:00 PM
Very emotional write by You.You really miss her very much!!Enjoyed the read.
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/25/2012 2:30:00 AM
Thank you my dear poet.
Date: 3/24/2012 11:09:00 AM
Well-written poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Chittaranjan Dey
Date: 3/25/2012 2:29:00 AM
Thank you for such a comment.

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