Baby Face Whats You Thinkin

I am only seven months old and I wonder
What will they feed me today
Will it be carrots yuck I ate those yesterday
Will it be pudding nope, dad just ate that today

I wonder when they will change me
This pee and poop stinks
Can they not hear me crying I will crank it up a notch
That dumb TV’s to loud

What is that spinning over me head
My eyes are going round and round
They think I am laughing but I am about to throw up
Who put this dumb thing over my head

They keep throwing me up into the air
Do they think I am some kind of toy
They better not drop me I am fragile you see
If they break me they will be sorry

I have no lifetime warranty
Another bath do they think I am a fish
What is that powder they are putting on me
My eyes are so tired I can’t keep them open

That’s okay we can do this all again, I wake up every four hours

Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr.
Name of Contest: Baby Face what’s you thinking
Date Created: 01/21/2019
Using Face #E
1st Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 2/5/2019 9:23:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. EXCELLENT COMPOSITION.
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Date: 2/5/2019 7:15:00 AM
Hi Bobby, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/21/2019 10:33:00 AM
Lol! Bobby, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It was though you were a baby and you said what was on your mind! I found it to be a clever and funny write. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 1/21/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend!
Date: 1/21/2019 10:03:00 AM
LOL I love the way this baby complains about the treatment he receives and I laughed out loud when I read his reaction to the mobile placed above his crib. And just think, every four hours these complaints begin anew. Great entry for the contest, Bobby! Winning wishes headed your way. Carolyn
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Bobby May
Date: 1/21/2019 10:20:00 AM
I remember all of that Carolyn, lol I did it when I was half asleep and I had to fix a few things but I woke up in 4 hours, Thank you my friend I am glad you enjoyed it
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