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Baby Face Whats You Thinkin

I am only seven months old and I wonder What will they feed me today Will it be carrots yuck I ate those yesterday Will it be pudding nope, dad just ate that today I wonder when they will change me This pee and poop stinks Can they not hear me crying I will crank it up a notch That dumb TV’s to loud What is that spinning over me head My eyes are going round and round They think I am laughing but I am about to throw up Who put this dumb thing over my head They keep throwing me up into the air Do they think I am some kind of toy They better not drop me I am fragile you see If they break me they will be sorry I have no lifetime warranty Another bath do they think I am a fish What is that powder they are putting on me My eyes are so tired I can’t keep them open That’s okay we can do this all again, I wake up every four hours Sponsored by: James Edward Lee Sr. Name of Contest: Baby Face what’s you thinking Date Created: 01/21/2019 Using Face #E 1st Place

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Date: 2/5/2019 9:23:00 AM
BIG CONGRATS to win top. EXCELLENT COMPOSITION.
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Date: 2/5/2019 7:15:00 AM
Hi Bobby, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/21/2019 10:33:00 AM
Lol! Bobby, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It was though you were a baby and you said what was on your mind! I found it to be a clever and funny write. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Bobby May
Date: 1/21/2019 10:57:00 AM
Thank you my sweet friend!
Date: 1/21/2019 10:03:00 AM
LOL I love the way this baby complains about the treatment he receives and I laughed out loud when I read his reaction to the mobile placed above his crib. And just think, every four hours these complaints begin anew. Great entry for the contest, Bobby! Winning wishes headed your way. Carolyn
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Bobby May
Date: 1/21/2019 10:20:00 AM
I remember all of that Carolyn, lol I did it when I was half asleep and I had to fix a few things but I woke up in 4 hours, Thank you my friend I am glad you enjoyed it

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